The Shakespeare Conference: SHK 20.0416 Thursday, 30 July 2009
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Date: Monday, 27 Jul 2009 14:22:13 -0500
Subj: Re: SHK 20.0409 What is Hamlet's flaw?
[2] From: Steve Roth <
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Date: Monday, 27 Jul 2009 14:02:16 -0700
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[3] From: Eric Johnson-DeBaufre <
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Date: Monday, 27 Jul 2009 19:09:15 -0400
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Date: Monday, 27 Jul 2009 21:49:59 -0400
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[5] From: Conrad Cook <
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Date: Monday, 27 Jul 2009 22:19:52 -0400
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From: Michael Saenger <
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Date: Monday, 27 Jul 2009 14:22:13 -0500
Subject: 20.0409 What is Hamlet's flaw?
Comment: Re: SHK 20.0409 What is Hamlet's flaw?
All of the preceding clarifications of the time-contingent
understanding of Aristotle have helped, but I think one of the most
interesting reasons why Hamlet doesn't have "a tragic flaw" is that
Shakespeare was not writing a riddle to be solved in the classroom.
Watching a play, or reading it, always involves interpretative
judgments, but the only such judgments that Shakespeare would have been
able to imagine were the kind that had occurred to that point. Of those
sorts of reactions, we have some samples -- stage narratives, influence
upon other playwrights, revivals and/or successful runs, parody by Ben
Jonson, that sort of thing. But the kind of criticism we teach our
students to do, and that we do ourselves, was fundamentally unthinkable
in Shakespeare's lifetime, and the idea of locating a tragic flaw is
deeply invested in a certain kind of pedagogy.
Michael
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From: Steve Roth <
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Date: Monday, 27 Jul 2009 14:02:16 -0700
Subject: 20.0409 What is Hamlet's flaw?
Comment: Re: SHK 20.0409 What is Hamlet's flaw?
>encourage anyone with a special interest in _Hamlet_
>on in Hamlet to go to this site and blog away
Well I haven't actually set up the blog at my site yet -- was just
floating the idea by Hardy -- but will do so in the next few days.
Thanks,
Steve
[Editor's Note: Sorry for my overzealousness. -Hardy]
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From: Eric Johnson-DeBaufre <
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Date: Monday, 27 Jul 2009 19:09:15 -0400
Subject: 20.0409 What is Hamlet's flaw?
Comment: Re: SHK 20.0409 What is Hamlet's flaw?
David Basch writes:
>Concerning the issues of Hamlet's flaws, I have a comments
>on Joe Egert's remarks. He writes:
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>Where is Claudius' guilt for murdering his predecessor
>publicly revealed in 5.2? I don't see it.
Just because Joe Egert doesn't see it does not mean that others, equally
astute and qualified as himself don't as well. For example, Lawrence
Olivier saw it in his film of Hamlet and helped his audience to do so.
In that film, we saw Claudius dramatically rise, quite disturbed, in
front of the court spectators. Gertrude is outraged at Hamlet for
bringing about this situation so angering to Claudius. If Hamlet had
struck him at the time, he, the people's favorite, could have argued
before the Danish court as the heir to the throne that the reenactment
of what Hamlet thinks happened with his father caught Claudius's
conscience more than anyone else and revealed his guilt. This
observation is something that Horatio corroborates. Thus, Hamlet would
have struck, beaten the rap, and saved himself. Joe Egert may not see it
this way but it is nevertheless an arguable point.
I think David Basch has misread 5.2 for 3.2 since he makes reference to
the Murder of Gonzago. More importantly though, I have to reiterate (and
I'm hardly alone in this) that Claudius' rising on the point of the
poisoning reveals nothing whatsoever about Claudius' guilt. Shakespeare
(deliberately I think) refuses any such clarity by making Hamlet speak
more than is set down for him (clown that he is). When the poisoner
enters, Hamlet informs us (and Claudius) that "This is one Lucianus,
nephew to the King." We then witness Lucianus poison the king by pouring
poison into his ears. Claudius rises. But what does he rise in response
to? Is he touched with guilt by seeing his own crime represented (as
David Basch would have it) or does he rise in fear at seeing an uncle
murdered by his nephew? We don't know. Hamlet presumably takes Claudius'
reaction to be a sign of guilt, but the irony is that Hamlet (easily one
of the most brilliant of Shakespeare's characters) shows himself to be a
poor auditor here. He signally fails to take his own advice to the
players (not to speak more than is set down for them), and this leads
him to introduce a measure of ambiguity and instability in to the very
thing he hoped would achieve clarity.
I find it something of a metadramatic commentary on the contemporary
defense of the theater as a moral institution. Apologists (and Hamlet in
2.2 seems to be among them) defended the theater by telling apocryphal
stories of murderers who confessed to their crimes after seeing them (or
something like them) represented on the stage. 3.2 (in my reading)
evinces a certain skepticism about this by showing a murderer rise in
reaction to a crime but providing the audience with two very different
and equally plausible reasons he might have for doing so.
Eric Johnson-DeBaufre
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From: David Bishop <
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Date: Monday, 27 Jul 2009 21:49:59 -0400
Subject: 20.0409 What is Hamlet's flaw?
Comment: Re: SHK 20.0409 What is Hamlet's flaw?
"Words and actions are separated from each other in 'Hamlet' and the
tragic hero has to try and somehow resolve the dilemma."
John Drakakis here makes what seems to me a good example of a
"theoretical" statement that can't quite be made pragmatically relevant
to this play. What does a world look like when words and actions are not
separated? Or is this just a way of saying that Claudius dissembles:
that Claudius's secret crime is Hamlet's dilemma? So what else is new?
This is what I call a Grand Abstract Pronouncement, or GAP. I don't want
to clutter up this list too much with my idiosyncratic theories, but in
the unlikely event that John Drakakis wants to have a look at my work,
he'll find a more detailed discussion of the concept of a GAP in my
book, Eight Hamlets, in the chapter on Marjorie Garber.
I thought the thing about revenge was that it was personal. As far as
it's impersonal, doesn't it become justice? Except, that is, for God,
who mystifyingly combines the two.
Best wishes,
David Bishop
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From: Conrad Cook <
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Date: Monday, 27 Jul 2009 22:19:52 -0400
Subject: What is Hamlet's flaw?
Joe Egert <
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>wrote:
>Conrad Cook interprets the Ghost as instructing Hamlet to "remove the
>usurper from the throne and see worldly justice done." Instead, in their
>first encounter, he commands the Prince to (1) revenge a murder, (2)
>stop the ongoing "luxury and damned incest" while leaving Momma to
>Heaven, and (3) remember him.
Joe,
(1) is worldly justice, there being no court to try the case. In (2),
you have omitted: *Let not the royal throne of Denmark be a couch* for
luxury and damned incest (or however it goes); what is at issue is the
moral pollution of the office of the head of state. In (2b), leaving
Gertrude to Heaven, the injunction is to for Hamlet to *taint not his
mind* against his mother, which in conjunction with (3) constitutes
instruction to keep a proper attitude toward his parents.
On this last point, the passage as a whole can be seen as an inventory
of how Hamlet should relate to all his three parents.
>Nowhere is 'justice' or God's will mentioned.
When there is no court which Claudius can be brought to, "revenge my
foul and most unnatural murder" amounts to "see worldly justice done."
The injunction that Gertrude be left to Heaven entails that her fate be
sorted out by God. The second instruction being given in contrast to the
first makes it clear, in my opinion, that fundamentally Hamlet is told
to straighten out matters of state. Going beyond this, as Hamlet does
when he tries to secure Claudius's damnation, is the action that causes
things to go bad.
Since a character flaw is the imbalance of virtue that causes the
protagonist to critically slip up, whatever it is that motivates Hamlet
not to kill Claudius, and to kill Polonius, is (I think) our prime
candidate for a character flaw in Hamlet.
In regard to the larger question of whether Hamlet really has an
Aristotelian flaw -- I think he does, but what is more important is
whether Shakespeare is doing the kind of thing Aristotle is talking
about when he discusses flawed characters. Aristotle's basic point is
that tragic characters, to be tragic, must bear some moral
responsibility for their downfall (or else they are victims), and yet
the consequences they suffer must be out of proportion to their error
(or else they get plain justice).
In my opinion, not only does Hamlet fulfill these criteria, but most of
the major characters do, too. Shakespeare expresses this pattern as
"being hoist on one's own petard," in the case of self-responsibility,
and that in a man, "the dram of evil doth all the noble substance snuff,
to his own scandal," in the case of disproportionate consequence.
Conrad.
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